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问题：英语作文语法Shouldweattendtrainingclasses?Today,itisbecomingincreasinglypopularthatstudentschoosetohavetrainingclassesinparttimeinordertogainhighermarksinavarietyoftestssuchasTEM.Graduatecandidatetestandsoon
答案：↓↓↓ 孙常品的回答： 网友采纳 可惜这里不能显示不同的颜色或加下划线.我直接改在上面了,加个括号表示好了 Shouldweattendtrainingclasses? Today,it(hasbecome)increasinglypopularthatstudentschoosetohavetrainingclassesinparttimeinordertogainhighermarksinavarietyoftestssuchasTEM,graduatecandidatetest（,ect）.Shouldthesetrainingclassesbefavored? Whenitcomesto(whetherweshouldattending)trainingclasses,somethinkthatisnecessary,theotherconsiderthat(it)isonly(awasteof)timeandmoney.Justlikeacoinhastwosides,trainingclasseshave(bothadvantagesanddisadvantages你都说了事情的两面了怎么还能只说优点呢).First,wecanknowthesubjectanditsgoalclearly.Teacherswillgiveusalogicalsummaryandpointouttheimportance.Second,wecanmakeuptheknowledgeloopholes.Combinedwithself-study,trainingclassescanbemorevaluable.（Ontheotherhand,)trainingclassesalsohavedisadvantages.First,itwillupsetourstudyplan.Withattendingtrainingclasses,wehavetocatchbusesorridebicycles.Sincetheweatherisbas,sometimeswecan’tarriveattrainingschools.Second,itwillcostagreatdealofmoney,whichwillincreasefinancialpressureforourstudentsespeciallyforsomepoorstudents. (lastbutnottheleast英语的习惯最后一个不能向前面一个排列数字）,notallteachersareappropriatetoyou.Teachers`methodandteachingstylearedifferentthatmaynotfitforus. Althoughtrainingclassesareprofitableforsomestudentswhocan’tcontrolthemselveswell,Ipreferstudyingbyourselves.Accordingtoourdifferentcircumstances,wecancontrolandallocatetimefreelyandreasonably.Itaeffectivewaytocompanywithanotherstudentwhohasthesamegoalwithus.Exchangingourstudymaterial,wecanobtainmoreknowledge.Encouragingeachother,wecangainmorecourage.Havingagoodhabittostudyandrestisbeneficialtostudyandhealth. AsforasIamconcerned,we’dbetterpasstestsby（ourselves）.Itagoodtimetoimproveourself-controlandself-studyability. 看得出来,你是套用了模板的,写得还行,但是也能看出来你背了一些东西,可基础相对还是比较薄弱,预感不是很强,而且自由发挥的地方明显以简单句居多,变化较少,还需要多积累点东西才是 | 
