我想请英语高手帮我纠正一下语法错误.我知道很多,但是拜托你们了.Well,herearethreemainaspectsthatIwillbetalkingabout.Childrenneedtounderstandtheirparents,MeetmorefriendsandExtendsomemorehobbies,initially

问题：我想请英语高手帮我纠正一下语法错误.我知道很多,但是拜托你们了.Well,herearethreemainaspectsthatIwillbetalkingabout.Childrenneedtounderstandtheirparents,MeetmorefriendsandExtendsomemorehobbies,initially

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董素君的回答：

网友采纳　　1.thereasonwhytheydoingitistheyhave.　　---they后加are,is后加that　　2.positive是何意?是不是要表达“娇气的公主”?---spoiledprincess