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1。 改变句子的开头方式，不是一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词作状语等。试比较: 1. To change the way a sentence begins, it is not always the beginning of the subject, then the predicate, the object, and finally an adverbial. You can put adverbials at the beginning of a sentence, or use participles as adverbials. Compare: (原文) My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day。 My brother and I went to the cinema by cycle the other day. (修正) The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle。 The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by cycle. (原文) The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news。 T he young man could't help crying when he heard the bad news. (修正) Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t help crying。 (Amendment) hearing the bad news, the young man could't help crying. 2。 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。例如: 2. In the whole article, we should avoid using only one or two sentence patterns, and use them flexibly, such as emphasis sentence, subject-subordinate compound sentence, participle phrase, inversion sentence, ellipsis sentence, etc. For example: | 
