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麦收时节，天空显得非常的明净。在黄金麦田上空，偶尔悠然地游过几朵白云。[写景简洁，突现神彩！] During the wheat harvest, the sky is very clear. In the sky over the golden wheat field, I occasionally swam a few white clouds leisurely. [the scenery is simple and vivid! ] 麦收时节，中午常是烈日当空。我们勤劳的父母，不得不在烈日下劳动。[起笔先点出“烈日”两次，重复得好！]因为作为农民，这是他们的义务。[说得多么本分！] In the wheat harvest season, the sun is often hot at noon. Our hardworking parents have to work in the hot sun. [point out the "hot sun" twice before starting. Good repetition! ]Because as farmers, it's their duty. What a gift! ] 我是一个农家子弟。我明白我们乡下的家长们要靠田地来生活，供我们上学。他们为了子女辛勤地劳动，但没有半句怨言。在家，我常听到他们说：“只要孩子搞好了，再苦再累，我们都愿意……”[可怜农家父母心！“搞好”，此词用得妙，传神。] I am a farmer's son. I understand that our parents in the countryside depend on the land to live and provide us with school. They worked hard for their children, but there was no complaint. At home, I often hear them say: "as long as the children do well, no matter how hard or tired, we are willing to..." Poor farmer's parents! "Do well", this word is well used and vivid. ] | 
