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着手上的唐诗宋词，我突发奇想，我已经不小了，我能不能作一首诗呢？我冥想了一会儿，就象瞎子摸象一样，不懂。所以我跑向能诗善画的叔叔那去。 The Tang poetry and Song poetry on hand, I have a whim, I am not small, can I make a poem? I meditated for a while, like a blind man touching an elephant. I didn't understand. So I ran to my uncle who was good at poetry and painting. “叔叔，写诗的要点是什么？”我急着问。 "Uncle, what's the point of writing poetry?" I asked in a hurry. 1、诗句简短而意义丰富， 1. Poems are short and meaningful, 2、诗要分行， 2. Poetry should be divided into branches, 3、诗的韵律感、节奏感较强。 3. Poetry has a strong sense of rhythm. 4、出美丽的想象(从平凡中看出不平凡)。 4. Make a beautiful imagination (see the extraordinary from the ordinary). 5、出动人的情意(加入感情)。 5. Stir up one's feelings. 这就是写诗的要点。必须好好斟酌。”叔叔平静地说。 This is the point of writing poetry. It has to be considered. " Said uncle calmly. “诗句简短意义丰富……”我一直在重复着叔叔所说的几句话，想了许久，悟出了一些明理，我便开始动笔。我准备写美丽的景色，取个题目《江南阅景》，第一句，我写道“空中飞花几多愁”，愁字体现了我当时的心情，不错！第二句写柳树“江边柳数几多柔”，对，柔字体现柳条飘动的情景，第三句写大雁“碧天大雁掠成行”，最后一句写总结“此景清美化心愁”。嗯，写得很美，总体就是“空中飞花几多愁，江边柳数几多柔。碧天大雁掠成行，此景清美化心愁。”读读，咦？诗中有两个“几多”，重复，我改什么好呢？“空中飞花飘散愁。”？不行不行，这样意思都变了，那“空中飞花飘扬愁。”吧！可以，就用这个了！ | 
