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2017届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第三部分考场习作评析）（四） 请你根据下列这幅图写一篇英语短文。要求： 1.描述图画； 2.就图画所反映的内容进行评论或提出自己的建议； 3.词数：150左右。 这是我们仿照北京市高考所出的题目。跟北京卷不同的是本书面表达要求词数达到150左右。同时考生可以按照半开放式作文的方法进行写作，也可以按照开放式作文的方法进行写作。我们这儿所选的考场习作为开放式的。 【考场习作】 (5)It’s funny that the factory is producing thick smoke while smoking is forbidden there. (6)Compared to the amount of smoke given off by the factory, the cigarette smoke is nothing at all. (7)However, actually there exist quite a few people who only know how to restrict others instead of themselves, which is hard to convince others. (8)As an old saying goes “sweep before your own door”. (9)Therefore we must be strict with ourselves before we are strict with others. (10)Only in this way can we build up a harmonious society. 在评析考生考场习作之前，先让我们来看一看该书面表达的最基本的要点是什么。 1.描述图片内容 2.自己的评论 【总体评价】 | 
