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[高考复习指南] 2016届高考英语一轮复习课件:第三部分 写作提升系列第一板块 能力层级(一)第8节(北师大版)

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  One who teaches morality but practices immorality is a wolf in a sheeps skin. 满口仁义道德,一肚子男盗女娼的人就是披着羊皮的狼。(比喻)

  [学以致用] 用“优雅性原则”翻译下列句子 1.要求这位秘书写报告时要快速、准确、全面。(排比) The secretary was asked to write the report quicklyaccurately and throughly. 2.老师说他是个差生,因为他要等到考试时才学习、做作业漫不经心、而且缺乏学习动力。(排比) The teacher said that he was a poor student because he waited until the last minute to study for the examcompleted his homework in a careless wayand lacked motivation. 3.世界就是个舞台,所有的男人和女人都是演员。(比喻) The whole world is a stage. All men and women are merely players. 4.自我批评的重要性就如同空气和水一样。(比喻) Self­criticism is as important to us as air and water. 第八节 亮点句式润色的七大原则 [技法指导]  作文要想得高分,必须要有吸引阅卷老师眼球的亮点。如何打造亮点句式呢?大家可以遵循以下七个原则。 原则一:新颖性  改掉句中的俗词,或合理调整句子语序,都有助于提升句子的新颖性。新颖的句子能为评卷者在评卷过程中带来良性体验,能有效提升作文表达和分值。 1.变换用词 行文时,既要避免使用俗词,又要避开冷僻词汇。 (1)Though it might be difficultyou will find a way of doing it at last and youll achieve success. →However difficult it might beyou will find a way of doing it at last and youll achieve success.(2017·山东高考满分作文) 无论有多困难,你最终会找到一种干它的方法并取得成功。 (2)I believe very much that a wise choice leads to perfection.

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