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I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours, Jamie 【写作点评】 (1)第一段中准确地使用了关系副词when引导的定语从句,一下子就抓住 了读者的注意力。 (2)第二段使用了first,second,and third来连接作者提出的这几条建议,表 达清晰,使文章前后连贯顺畅。 3 跟踪训练 (2017辽宁大连第二十高级中学期中) 假设你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末或在假 期中帮助家人做家务的一次经历。 写作要点:1.做家务的理由;2.做家务的过程;3.你的感受。 注意:1.词数不少于100;2.开头已给,不计入总词数;3.不可写真实姓名。 注意时态。 I am an 18-year-old middle school student. 【范文】 I’m an 18-year-old middle school student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help. Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,I suddenly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly,I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that,I swept and mopped the floor. At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and the floor shining.My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes.Tired as I was,I never felt so happy. 写作指导 栏目索引 写作指导 栏目索引 课标卷外研版 英语 写作指导四 过渡词语 1 过渡词语指导 一、根据过渡词本身在文章中起的作用,主要分为以下四类,即“起” “承”“转”“合”。 1.表示“起”的过渡词:用于开篇引出扩展句。如: at first,at present,currently,recently,first(ly),in general,in the beginning,to begin with,first of all,generally speaking,in the first place,to start with, presently,now等。 2.表示“承”的过渡词:用来承接上下文。如: after/after that/afterwards,by this time,after a few days,certainly,after a | 
