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第六讲 打造写作亮点提升写作档次 阅读下面短文体会其中高级词汇和句式的使用。尽管父母爱我如初但随着年龄的增长眼界的开阔Perfect Parents in My Mind”为题写一篇120个词左右的短文谈谈理想中的父母应该是什么样的。Perfect Parents in My Mind My parents are concerned about everything about me；what to eat and wearwho to make friends with，what hobbies to have...But I am an adult now.I do want to make my own decisions and lead my own life. Therefore，I do wish they would allow me to make decisions sometimes.I wish they’d understand that working hard to prepare for university does not mean reading textbooks and doing a sea of exercises only; other activities also count，like sports，music and extensive reading.I wish they would take me as equal；they would include me in any decision making in the familyfor I’m a member and should have my voice heard. I hope that my parents not only love me，but trust me，and understand me as well. 提升写作档次的窍门就是增加文章中的亮点句式打造亮点句子巧妙布局谋篇。一、词汇的选择和使用要多样性词汇的选择要新颖独到在有把握的前提下使用在阅读中碰到的高级词汇相信阅卷者会对你的文章刮目相看。试体会下列句子黑体部分被括号中的高级词汇替代后的效果。About the money you charge，does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed？(As for)for the move.(in favor of) | 
