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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线 (＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起)不计分。 1 (2017·西安模拟) Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I had only skied for four days in my whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor did well in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straight A抯, Dad said, 揑 promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ?Victor抯 dream was to see really snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation, and then took a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw some snow on or gthe trees. We began to play snow! No one in my family had ever touched snow before. We were all like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at each other. 2 The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I抦 on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the xother hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow. | 
