第五部分 写作 专题一 短文改错 Ⅰ.体验高考 (2017·浙江卷)I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long,a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need,the world would be a better place to live in. 答案 I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I noticed that the carriage was and filled with people. Before long,a train inspector to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from owner.The person who found ticket smiled with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had |