②C ②I would appreciate ________ very much if you could give me some suggestions. A. this B. that C. it D. you ③A ③Will you see to ________ that my child is taken good care of while I am away? A. it B. me C. yourself D. them 如何增加亮点(Ⅰ) 要想把一篇文章写好、写完美,并列句、复合句的使用固然给文章润色不少,但是高效词汇和复杂句型的使用更能给文章增加亮点。具体说来,可以尝试以下方法: 1. 交叉使用长句与短句 根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短句,使文章显得错落有致,这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。 [例]中午我们在太阳下吃野餐。休息一会儿后,我们唱歌的唱歌,跳舞的跳舞,还有的讲故事、下棋,大家玩得很开心。 [一般句]At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. [优秀句]At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling stories and playing chess. 2. 避免同一词语的重复使用 为了使文章更生动、更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字,就会立刻想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多,如love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。 [例]我喜欢读书,而我的弟弟喜欢看电视。 [一般句]I like reading while my brother likes watching television. [优秀句]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. 3. 适当使用短语代替单词 [例]他已决定长大了当老师。 [一般句]He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up. [优秀句]He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up. |