③I was going to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car,which drove off quickly. → I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car,which drove off quickly. (4)避免重复原则 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词,必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 ①I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. ②We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also built a library where the old playground used to be. →We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also set up a library where the old playground used to be. 常见高级写作词汇必备 1.第一first →to begin/start with 2.第二second →in addition/what’s more 3.最后finally→ last but not least 4.总之in a word→ to sum up/in conclusion/in summary 5.但是but→ however 6.机会chance→ opportunity 7.选择choice→ alternative 8.考虑consider→ take into account/consideration 9.充足enough →adequate 10.影响effect→ influence 11.最终finally→ eventually 12.勤奋hardworking→ diligent 13.帮助help→ assist 14.后果result→ consequence 15.应该should→ be supposed to |