* * 主题:和谐的师生关系对你的影响(2011天河一模) [提出观点] Actually, having a good relationship with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school. [举例说明] Take me for example. [例子] My teacher is my good friend. 晨读狂背语篇模板 When I fail in the exam, it is my teacher that first helps me to analyze the problem. She is patient enough to make me get over all the difficulties in my study. When I am unhappy, she always listens to me carefully and then gives me some reasonable suggestions, so that I can focus on my study soon. Also, I have learned to be helpful and considerate. [重申主题] But for the good relationship with my teachers, I could not have made such progress. 举例说明就是通过举例子来证明某种观点, 阐明某种道理。例子不必长篇大论, 但一定要与主题相吻合。写例子之前可用一句话过渡, 写完例子后用一两句话重申主题。 灵活运用超级模仿 一、句式模板 (1) However, there are other ways to make students work hard. For example, teachers can reward us with small gifts if we do a good job. (2) A good parent should possess some good qualities, especially when facing her children. Take my mother, a model parent, as an example. (3) There is no denying that confidence plays an important role in our life. A convincing example that jumps into my mind is about speaking English. (4) From what is mentioned above, we can safely draw the conclusion that confidence really makes a difference. Therefore it’s wise for us to stay confident all the time. |