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江西莲花县2017高考英语书面表达一轮选编（三）及参考范文 2016书面表达训练 假如你是李华，你的美国网友Jack目前正在一家孔子学院学习汉语，你们俩约定每周都给对方写一封信，他用汉语，你用英语，以期相互学习和帮助。最近你收到他发来的一封电子邮件，请你根据下列提示用英语给他写一封回信： 1. 表扬他的进步，并指出来信中的错误； 2. 给他一些改进的具体建议； 3. 你将发给他一篇游记，期待他对你的邮件进行回复。 注意：1. 词数：80-120； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter. ____________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jack, I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter. I’m proud to tell you that you have made rapid progress in such a short time! You letter is better written than the last one. Obviously, you have mastered how to use some Chinese characters freely. But it doesn’t mean there’s no problem at all. For instance, unlike English, we usually use “因为……所以……” in one sentence. So you should correct the fourth sentence in your letter. And I advise you to do more reading and try to use these sentence patterns in your writing as possible as you can. | 
