写作进阶提升之四 ——衔接与过渡 写作进阶提升 把要点按照时间先后,空间顺序,逻辑关系,因果关系整理,加以适当调整,加入过渡词来串句成文。 体会一下 Eg1. He works hard. He is not likely to have a successful career. He will still be a useful person in the society. He works hard, but he is not likely to have a successful career. However, he will still be a useful person in the society. Eg2. Because he helped me in time, I passed the exam. Thanks to his timely help, I passed the exam. As a result of his timely help, I passed the exam. He helped me in time, as a result, I passed the exam. 表时间关系的关联词 开始 然后 最终 at first, at the beginning of, in the beginning, to begin with, first(ly), first of all at last, at length, finally, eventually, in the end after a while, afterwards, and then, later, after that, next, shortly after, the next moment 同时 at the same time, in the meantime, meanwhile 过去 at that time, before by that time, earlier, formerly, in the past 现在 at present, presently, right now, nowadays, up to now Eg. Then I will be happy to be your guide. The next moment the car hit him while he was crossing the road. 其他 from now on , immediately, right away, right now, shortly, soon, until, when, as soon as, since then, for the time, the moment/minute, hardly...when, no sooner...than, sooner or later, gradually, before long, suddenly 表空间关系的关联词 说明文和描写文中,表空间方位和顺序 |