三、典例分析 1.试题要求 写一篇短文,简述Green School受欢迎的原因。要求包含以下内容: (1)历史悠久; (2)校园美丽; (3)设备良好。教学楼、实验楼、语音室、计算机房、图书馆及体育馆都是全市最好的; (4)收费合理; (5)教师出色,大部分毕业于名牌大学。他们有耐心,有经验,热爱学生。 注意:不要逐条翻译。不少于100词。 2.内容分析: 这是一篇提示类作文,内容涉及Green School,故它实际上是一篇描述性说明文。该文写作重点是Green School受欢迎的原因,题干中提供了较为充实的写作材料,考生可从Green School的历史、环境、设备、收费以及教师品质等几个方面加以说明。 注意事项: ①题干所提供的内容较为繁杂,动笔前应仔细分析材料加以整合,以便于描写; ②所使用句式应注意变化,避免出现单一的It is… /It has…之类的句式。 3.佳作赏析 Why is Green School so popular? Green School is a beautiful school with a long history, in which trees and flowers are growing here and there. Having the best facilities such as the classroom buildings, the experiment labs and the sound labs, the computer rooms, the library as well as the gymnasium, the school is equipped very well. What's more, it is less costly than other schools. Even so, teachers in the school are excellent, and most of them graduated from famous universities and colleges. These experienced teachers who are devoted to their teaching are patient with students and have deep love for the students as well. |