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如果一篇作文将写作要点都覆盖了，但通篇都是简单句，结果得分一定不高。如果能适当地使用并列句，就可以提高文章的质量。首先，我们可根据写作要求的各要点形成几个简单句，再将简单句中有内在逻辑联系的句子用适当的并列连词合并为并列句。 活用 一、请根据并列句的逻辑关系加上恰当的并列连词，将两个句子合并为一个并列句 1. This will cost quite some money. It's worthwhile in a long run. 答案 1. This will cost quite some money; nevertheless, it's worthwhile in a long run. 2. He would have won the game easily. He fell and broke his leg. 3. He had failed many times. He was confident that he would succeed in the end. 答案 2. He would have won the game easily; however, he fell and broke his leg. 3.He had failed many times, but/yet he was confident that he would succeed in the end. 4. Girls are jealous of Mary. Mary is very beautiful and successful. 5. The chance is slim. They never give up hope. 答案 4. Girls are jealous of Mary, for she is very beautiful and successful. 5.The chance is slim, but/yet they never give up hope. 6. The moon was hidden entirely behind the dark clouds. Not a single star could be seen. 7. Please start early. You can go there in time. 8. She sings well. She dances beautifully. 答案 6. The moon was hidden entirely behind the dark clouds, and/so not a single star could be seen. 7. Start early, and you can get there in time. 8. Not only does she sing well, but also she dances beautifully. 活用 | 
