Units 3~4 晨读在线 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。 注意:词数不少于120。 【范文欣赏】 请同学们进行完形填空(每空填一个单词) Last weekend,I did something very meaningful.I helped my grandparents prepare their trip 1.to Beidaihe. I woke up very early 2.on Saturday morning.I surfed the Internet searching for the information for their trip,such 3.as the weather,the hotel,the transportation,etc.By inquiring all 4.the questions we had in mind,I helped them make the final plan for this trip.After breakfast,,,following the list my grandparents gave me,I helped them pack up their baggage.To make ,I even made a ,I saw them 7.off at the railway station. ear grandparents.(147 words) 【名师点评】 文章要点齐全,写作层次清楚,以时间顺序展开全文,能紧扣图片要点,上下文连贯。在表达句式上,注意了句式结构的多变,以简单句为主,适当地使用了并列句,简单通俗易懂。注重了连接过渡词的使用,如after breakfast,later in the day,on Sunday morning等,简单中不乏显示出较强的基本功和语言运用能力。 |