Unit 1 Getting along with others 晨读在 最近,李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹(自己设想),用英语为班级板报写一篇不少于120词的短文。你的文章应包括下列要点: 李越的事迹及其对同学的影响; 你的评论。 注意:文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。 【范文欣赏】 请进行完形填空(每空一词) Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for 1.what she did for our class.2.On the hot afternoon of last Saturday,Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to 3.another,looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. ,she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting.Finally,5.she found the right clothes.Deeply moved by her ,we tried our best and won 6.the first prize in the contest. -hearted and cares a lot about the class.Besides,she often devotes her spare time 7.to helping others.She arn from her.(128 words) 【名师点评】 文章要点齐全,写作层次清楚,能紧扣要点框架适当地增加细节,例如“and walked from one store to another”,从而使行文连贯。在表达句式上,注意了句式结构的多变,以简单句为主,适当地运用并列句,还用到了限制性定语从句,如“we would wear in the singing contest”;在语法角度上,还用了非谓语动词作状语,如“ostumes...”“Deeply moved by her efforts”;同时还注重了连接过渡词及固定短语的使用,如“while”“ devote...to...”等,从而显示出较强的语言运用能力。 |