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Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 People here ③ live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! ① This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 1978 People here ③ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. 书面表达： ⑤ In the past, the school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. ⑥ The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys. It is the most beautiful building in the village. ⑦ All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. ⑤ In the past, the school here was very small but now it has been rebuilt ⑦ All the school-age children can study here. What’s more, they enjoy free education.. ⑥ the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. Thank you. How to improve your writing? 1.Avoid the mistakes we often make 2.Use complex sentences 3.Use different sentence structures 4.Use proper transitional words 5.Use advanced words Rome is not built in one day. Practice makes perfect! 返回 Some effective sentences of the possible version as examples. | 
