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2017届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义（北师大版）：写作（十六） 去年寒假我同父亲去乡下看望奶奶，我多年未回家乡，看到那儿发生了很大的变化。这次故乡之行使我学到了不少东西。我打算今后每两年回去一次。学生习作·外教批改 During my last winter holiday，I went to the1countryside with my father to visit mygrandma with_my_father.2 I found a_large_change great changes there.The first time I came_back3 returned，theyare_live4 were all living in dirty homes with dogs and ducks and any5 otheanimals.Now，6 But last winter when I returned, they had a_big_house_to_birth_chickens.7 They also have8 had some poles in_which_it_has9_some_fish fishponds.Every year，they sell it_and_have the fish for a lot of money. A lot of villagers in my grandma’s village have10 had two-storeyed houses，evidencing that their life11 lives becoming better_and_better12 had improved.I felt very happy. During my trip，I found they_are13 all the villagers friendly and hard-working.I think these characteristics are worth of learning. At the end of my trip，I told my father that I had_planned14 that_I_would_come_back planned to return every two years.He admitted15 agreed that it was a good idea. , 旁 批 1．country或countryside前要加定冠词the。 | 
