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2017届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义（北师大版）：写作（十九） 李华在校学习成绩很好。他做完作业后喜欢看电视。他的父亲不允许他看电视，怕李华会因看电视而影响功课。李华却不这么认为。 学生习作·外教批改 Li Hua is one of the top students in his school.He likes watching TV，but his fatherdisagrees1 disapproves for fear that it would2 will make his study3 studies suffer.However，Li Hua holds a different view. He insists that watching TV shouldn’t be banned completely.He thinks4 believes that he won’t get addicted to it.If one5 he can cope_with balance his study studies in_harmony with entertainment in_a_proper_way6 ，his study grades won’t be affected at all. It is also his belief that TV can even benefit him a lot.It_can_not_only7 Not only can it keep him informed about the8 national and international current affairs，but it can also provide profound knowledge，thus broadening his horizons. What Li Hua believes is that TV itself is not a bad thing as long as people who watch it don’t abandon themselves to it.Therefore，he intends to have_a_word9 talk with his father to convey his ideas. ,旁 批 1．disagree不能用来描述某人的行为，应该用disapprove(不赞成)。 2．这是真实条件句，因此要用will而不是would。 | 
