第四步:理清逻辑关系,合并句子。第1、2、3句有因果关系可以合并为一句。第7、8句之间有相同主语,且有一定因果关系,可以用非谓语动词衔接。 第五步:连词成篇。运用适当的衔接词语使文章连贯,使文章的结构紧凑。 One possible version: Friday May 20, 2017 Sunny This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends. I had been in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well in the math exam and in the evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends. At the KTV, everybody sang his favorite songs very happily except me — I as only one of the audience. I dare not have a try because I was afraid that I couldn't sing well. Encouraged by my friends, I picked up the microphone and sang an English song entitled “I believe I can fly”. I have become cheerful now and above all I've regained selfconfidence. I believe that the worst enemy in one's life is oneself. I shouldn't lose heart just because of one or two failures because I still have chances to try. 请根据下面内容要点,写一篇日记。 【写作内容】 10月11日星期天,天气晴朗,上午10点,你在一家商店买东西,这时来了一位美国妇女。她要给丈夫买一件衬衫。由于售货员不懂英语,他们都很着急。你了解了情况,帮助了他们。对此,美国妇女对你非常感谢。你对自己能与外国人交谈感到很高兴。 |