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0-4分 第一篇 Dear Sir or Madam , I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as (加a)Chinese teacher . I understand what should be instruction study of children (不能理解你的意思).My proficiency of(改为proficient) skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature(这里填专业名称).In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as(serve as 后面加职位名称) senior middle school. . I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration. 第二篇 Dear sir or madam, I am writting(拼写错误，改为writing) this letter(删除) to apply for a position of(改为as) secretary. I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2013.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could comunication(改为communicate)with foreigner fluently. Also I was past(改为passed) the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past(改为passed) national computer test brand three before I enter(加ed) university. I can skilled(改为skillfully) operate the majority of office software(加s). | 
