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[考研大学英语写作] 2006考研英语作文万能模式:针砭时弊型(2)

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预测范文二 一个学生在疯狂的做作业, 面前有一大堆模拟题,头上冒汗,老师又给了一大堆作业

.As is vividly depicted in the picture, a student was buried in the large pile of textbooks and rushed to do the surprisingly large amount of homework .The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, the student was wearing a lot of sweats and suffered great pains form the excessively heavy burdens caused by the pressure of enterting a high school. Recently the phenomenon that the students are tortured by the heavy burdens of assignments has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of destroying the the health of students should be condemned severely or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害,并举例论证,预测 危害的趋势

To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several effects have been put forward. To begin with,heavy burdens of homework not only results in the loss of interest in the study for students but also does harm to the physical and mental health since the children are overworked and have no time for rest or relaxation . In addition, so much homework will cause the students to spare no time for their hobbies or interests ,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93%of young people who have once suffered the pains of heavy burdens of homework feel sick about what they did and had no free time to develop their talents such as sports, music and computers. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our students who maybe become dull or even goes insane.

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