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一、冠词的使用 1. 原文：Nowadays, a increasing number ofpeople... 诊断：元音单词increasing前的不定冠词应用an而不是a。这样的错误在口语中不容易犯，但写到纸上时就容易忽视。所以说，写完的作文不仅要重看，更要“重读”，才能借助语感揪出这样的小错误。 修改：Nowadays, an increasing number ofpeople... 2. 原文：However, whether the government... on arts is controversial issue. 诊断：issue是可数名词，但这里既没有用冠词又不是复数，显然是有问题的。 修改：However, whether the government... on arts is a controversial issue. 二、名词单复数 3. 原文：However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services ... 诊断：fund表示政府拨款的“资金”，此处应该使用复数，表示多笔拨款。 修改：However,whether the government should allocate funds topublic services ... 4. 原文：In my view, public service are vitalto our life, but... 诊断：句子主语public service与谓语are不一致，主语是单数，而谓语是复数用法。此处public services泛指“公共服务”，应用复数。 | 
