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[雅思英语写作] 教你如何写出具有雅思范儿的高分作文

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说到雅思的考官范文,相信很多备同学的感受都是“敬而远之”, 认为考官的范文都是以生词难句组成的。事实真的是这样么?但凡可以静下心来推敲考官范文的学生, 都会发现考官的范文并没有我们的想象的那么难。甚至还有点“简单”—— 用词简单,但句式很多样。

先给大家看一篇考官范文,来看看考官是如果用简单的词写出不简单的句子的。此文选自剑桥雅思真题集8- Test1.

首先进入到文章的开头段:

A childs education has never been about learning information and basic skills only.(1)It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society.(2)Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone. (3)

无论是第一句话中的“never”及“only”也好, 还是最后一句的“not”及“alone”也好, 考官都运用了我们在汉语表述同样会用得到的一种表达形式——双重否定表肯定, 从而增强句子语气。 第二句中的the next generation 也是不错的用法, 这也是我们上一讲中提到过的less common vocabulary。 短语中的单独每个单词挑选出来大家都认识, 但是放到一起的这种说法, 大部分同学还是无法掌握的。

接下来我们进入到文章的主体段2:

In order to be a good member of any society the individual mustrespect and obey the rules of their community and share their values.(1) Educatingchildren to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents.(2)They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world. (3)

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