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托福作文时间短，任务大，很多考生会在语法、句型及拼写等方面犯错误。其实这些错误在托福备考过程中，大家也可能会犯，不过因为不重视，或者无人指点，所以没有及时改正。本文中，老师为大家整理一篇高一生的托福作文的点评，希望对大家有所帮助。 托福写作真题： Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 托福写作范文： Nowadays the food we eat is prepared fast and it really had an influence in our life. With all the aspects concerned, the change is considered to be negative. As the time of the preparation is shortened, the nutrition in the food is reduced as well. Food producers do not focus on how much the protein and the vitamins should be contain, instead they just want to make the preparation shorter and shorter, which will be more efficient to satisfy the customers need, and this will help them to earn more money. Because of this reason, we can not obtain much nutrition from the food but only calories, and they do nothing to health. Another aspect must not be ignored is that food plays an important role in our daily life. Sometimes we use food of various styles, tastes and colors to express our feelings just like musicians use tunes to express their passions. Fast preparation makes it impossible to show its advantage in art. All the food are the same taste, same style, and it makes the meal boring. Some people may even lose their appetite for meals as they are offered such a dull supper. | 
