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1.结构不平行 例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。 2.不知所云 例：Many companies began using computers mouth. 3.段落过长，不分段，主语与动词一致问题 She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数方面不一致。 4.句子别扭 We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。 5.不要使用缩写 在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(cant，dont，its，well，theyve等等)，而应当使用单词的完整形式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。 6.关联词语重复 Since I want to go to a good school，therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。 7.句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example， my friend in high school.句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。 | 
