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[小升初复习] 实用英语写作的技巧 (第13单元)

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第十三单元 推展段落方法之五举例法

13.1举例法

举例法(examples)也是推展主题的主要方法。举例法有两种形式,一种是首先陈述自己的观点,然后举出一个或多个例子阐明观点;另一种是先举一个很长的例子,然后转入例子所要阐明的观点。

读下面段落:

Courage is the willingness to take a risk when the outcome is uncertainand when the risk taken may involve harmlossor danger to the one taking it.The courageous person fears no one and nothing.He or she is undaunted by danger or peril.He or she will venture boldly into an uncertain situationhardly giving a thought to the harm or consequences which may result to his or her person.

以上段落的缺点是乏味、含糊,不能向读者表达作者关于courage的看法。请看下面重写后的段落。

示范段落13-1

Courage is the willingness to take a risk when the outcome is uncertainand when the risk taken may involve harmlossor danger to the one taking it.For examplein a Los Angeles suburba twelveyearold girl ran into a burning house to rescue her baby brotherpulled him unconscious out of the burning bedroomand dragged him down the stairs and outside to safety.This was arousing display of courage.The girl had been safe outside the flaming house when she remembered her sleeping brother.Disregarding her personal safetyshe plunged into the flaming house to save him.

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