1.完整 完整是就段落中心的内容而言。为了使一个段落的内容完整,它所有的句子必须都围绕着一个中心主题进行叙述。中心主题往往由一中心句点出,即所谓的主题句。主题句或中心句可置于段首,也可置于段中或段末。请看下面的例子: One of the central preoccupations of the arts and humanities is the observation of human beings. Painters and sculptors create images of the human form; writers tell stories or compose poems about human experience; musical artists give melodic contours to the human spirit; historians and philosophers ponder the essential qualities of human civilization and nature. And in our own lives, in our own ways, we spend a great deal of our energy and attention on our fellow creatures, being in families and other kinds of relationship, observing people with curiosity and interest in the course of the day, thinking about and forming our own character-deciding what kind of person we wish to be-as we grow. -- Don Knefel 2.连贯 连贯是指段落的结构是否有条理。一个段落中的句子应该条理清晰,层次分明,衔接自然流畅。只有做到这些,读者才能跟上作者的思路,明白他要讲的意思。 3.过渡 在一个段落里,即使所有的句子意思都清楚并且逻辑顺序排列正确,但是如果缺乏句与句之间恰当的过渡,整个段落的连贯性仍会受到影响。 |