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  I am a student. I want to visit the military exhibtion(拼写错误)with my classmate. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding exhibition.

  Firstly, where is the exhibitions place in your city, (加连词and)which bus can I take to get there? Secondly, please tell me a dates(单复数保持一致,建议把a改成the) of its opening and closing?Thirdly, I would like to inquire if there is any discounts available on entrance tickets for student?

  Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

  

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