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  I was the graduate who ever lived in your dormitory when I studied in Canada. Now I have came(come的过去分词是come) back in my hometown. As(去掉,否则这句话有语法问题) I went away so hastily that I forgot to return the CD which you lended(lend的过去式是lent) it(去掉,前边有which) to me several weeks ago.

  I am indeed very sorry for what I did, but believe that I had no intention to do that. To remedy my mistake, I provide some ways of solving this problem for you to choose.

  One is that I would like to delivery(应该用动词deliver) it to you by EMS as soon as possible. The other is that if you are not busy listening to it recently, I will bring it to you when I come back to Canada next month.

  Please accept my sincere apologies for my oversight. I will look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

  

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