人人终身学习知识网~是各类综合知识资源信息分享,提升综合素质与提高知识技能的终身学习网络平台

 找回密码
 立即注册

QQ登录

只需一步,快速开始

微信登录

微信扫码,快速开始

[考研大学英语写作] 考研英语作文范文批改(173)

[复制链接]

  I am a music fans from Chengdu. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding the New Year Concert.

  I am planning to see the concert, so I need to know the following three(加一个被three修饰的名词). First of all, I want to confirm the date of the concert. Secondly, where is the concerts place? Thirdly, which bus can I take to get the(去掉) there?

  I would also like to inquire if you please send me some relevant booklets about the above-mentioned aspects?(这是个陈述句,用句号。这句话用在这里比较生硬,很明显是模板中的内容。)Thank you for your consideration, your prompt attention would be highly appreciated.

  

回复

使用道具 举报

小黑屋/人人终身学习知识网~是各类综合知识资源信息分享,提升综合素质与提高知识技能的终身学习网络平台

Powered by 5wangxiao

© 2007-2021 5wangxiao.Com Inc.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表