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  I would like organizing(would like to do) a group of student(加不定式to) learn about history to pay a visit in your old town.(整理一下这句话,太对的不定式) Therefore, I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information concerning visited details.

  First of all, what are the daily opening hours and if the old town opened around(这句话在这里要表达什么意思?古城是否营业?)?

  Secondly, if there is have(去掉,there be句型,is作主语) shows for spread characteristic of the old town.

  The last but (加not) least, do we have a guide? We want to konw(拼写错误) more about the old town for our study. I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

  

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