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  Im writing to apply the job of(用介词for) secretary of faculty manager in your company after I saw the preferred imformation(拼写错误)from(改成on the) Internet.

  First of all, I am the(应该用补丁冠词a) student of Tongji University, majoring in business management and will graduate in this summer. I have the outstanding skill of(改成inskill in) English listening comprehension and (这儿最好加have)abilities to speak Chinese and English fluently and to write papers proficiently.

  In addition, encouraged by your companys professional spirit, I was much greatful(拼写错误) to be employed by your company, being a intership(拼写错误) last year. The experience will be never unforgettable(unforgettable就是难忘的,前边不要加never) throughout of(throughout就是介词,去掉of) my life.

  

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