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考研英语待批改作文： Dear Sir or Madam, I am a senior undergraduate from the department of financial management of Xuzhou Normal University.I am writing letter in purpose of applying for admission into your recetly advertised position for an accountant. I am sure that I am qualified for it.To begin with,enclose with this letter is my resume,which further detail my academic qualifications and work experience.Then,I am not only familaring with Microsofe Word,Excel,but also I have ability to work independently and good organizational skills.Last but not least,my prudent personality is well suited to study in your prestigious working as an accountant. Words fail me and I wish to express my sincere gratitude to the help you render me.I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Yours turly, Li Ming 考研英语作文批改点评如下： Dear Sir or Madam, I am sure that I am qualified for it. To begin with, enclose with this letter is my resume, which further detail(应该用第三人称单数形式) my academic qualifications and work experience. Then, I am not only(应该改为not only I am，与后面的格式保持一致) familaring(拼写错误) with Microsofe(拼写错误) Word, Excel, but also I have ability to work independently and good organizational skills. Last but not least, my prudent personality is well suited to study in your prestigious working as an accountant. | 
