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[考研大学英语写作] 考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改33

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  Im writting to apply for the position on your advertisement.I would be much grateful if youre so kind as to take my application into consideration.

  I find myself quite fit for your position-accountant.To begin with,my major subject is account at university.Then,Im studying the CPA and other certificates as well.Im sure my preparation would conform to the job.

  Thanks for your time .I wish you can give me a chance for interview. Look forward to your reply.

  Yours sincerely,

  LiMing

  考研英语作文批改点评如下:

  Dear sir or madam(Sir or Madam), Im writting(拼写错误writing)to apply for the position on your advertisement. I would be much grateful if youre so kind as to take my application into consideration. I find myself quite fit for your position-accountant. To begin with, my major subject is account at university. Then, Im studying the CPA and other certificates as well. Im sure my preparation would conform to the job. Thanks for your time .I wish you can give me a chance for interview. Look forward to your reply. 【Yours sincerely, LiMing】(落款部分写在右下角) 点评:5-6分

  内容有点少,第二段可以适当的加一两句话,让你自己看上去更有吸引力。第一段的第二句话可以放在最后一段。

  

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