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考研英语待批改作文： Dear sir, I am writing for the position that your company advertising on TIME newspaper.I believe I will be fit for it because of my experience an knowledge. I have had worked for a famous IT company as a manager.I solved many problems there.With time is going ,I accumulate amount of experience.I am sure I am comptent for the position for manager you are employing.As reading lots of books about psychology, I can well understand behavior of employers.Therefore I can manage them better.You will be never regret if employed me. I look forward to your repaly. Sincerely yours, Li ming 考研英语作文批改点评如下： Dear sir(因为不知道是男士还是女士，改成Sir or Madam),I am writing for the position that your company advertising(这里应该用动词的过去时advertised) on TIME newspaper. I believe I will be fit(这里需要用一个形容词) for it because of my experience an(and?) knowledge. I have had(去掉，后面的work是动词) worked for a famous IT company as a manager(for X years). I solved many problems there. With time is going(going on), I accumulate amount of(an amount of或是amounts of) experience. I am sure I am comptent(拼写错误，competent) for the position for manager you are employing(这里要表达的是什么意思?). As reading lots of books about psychology, I can well understand (加定冠词the) behavior of employers. Therefore I can manage them better. You will be never regret if employed me. | 
