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I am thank for you can spend your precious time reading my letter. The reason of writing this letter for me is today I find the message of recruiting about HR assistant on your companys website. I make insterested in this position and I want to apply for it. Next I want to talk about my capability and experience for applying the job. I had been graduated from my university nearly one year. My major is English, but after finishing my university life, I worked in SN company and afforded the work of shop HR assistant.So I can skillfully operate the five object in human resource:Salary,Recruitment,Trainging and so on. I can aslo skillfully operate the Word ,Excel and PPT. My deposition is outer and my ability of talking and communicating with somebody is great. So I feel I alreadly fit for the needing of recruitng this position, if you give a chance for me trying it ,I will do my best in this positon. I would appreciate for the apply if you as soon as possibie. My contacted pnone number is 13757194566. Yous sincerely LiMing 2011,16th,October 考研英语作文批改点评如下： Dear Miss Chen:(改成逗号) I am thank for you can spend(thank you for spending) your precious time reading my letter. The reason of writing this letter for me(去掉，或者改成of me，建议去掉) is(加that，这里的that不能省略) today I find(应该用过去式，因为这个动作已经发生) the message of recruiting about HR assistant on your companys website. I make insterested(am interested) in this position and I want to apply for it. | 
