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考研英语待批改作文： Dear Sir or Madam, Im writting this letter in order to applying for your recently advrtised position for interior designer .I obtain the news form newpaer.I am suer that I am qualitied it . I am a interior designer from Department of Envionmental Art.With this letter that I proved detail resume. First ,I have been work experience for 7 years. Second, I have acquiet many detail of struction ,Equipment, local and national lows. Third, I could ripidly operating computer. In addition, I could led the team work owing to I have cheerful personality. Finally, I look forward to your reply,and to attending yours company. Yours sincerely Li Ming 考研英语作文批改点评如下： Dear Sir or Madam, Im writting(拼写错误，writing) this letter in order to applying(改成apply，in order to do) for your recently advrtised(拼写错误，advertised) position for interior designer .I obtain the news form(加冠词)newpaer(拼写错误，newspaper). I am suer(拼写错误，sure) that I am qualitied(拼写错误，qualified to，加介词to) it . I am a(应该用不定冠词an，后面是以元音开头的词语) interior designer from Department of Envionmental(拼写错误，environmental) Art. With this letter that I proved detail resume. First ,I have been work experience for 7 years(可以说I have worked for 7 years或是I have a seven-year work experience，但是不能将两种说话合在一起说). Second, I have acquiet(拼写错误，acquired?) many detail(应该用复数details) of struction(拼写错误，structure?) , Equipment(e不用大写), local and national lows. Third, I could ripidly(拼写错误，rapidly) operating computer. In addition, I could led the team work owing to I have cheerful personality. | 
