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思路点拨 中一个已经喝得烂醉如泥的司机，车顶上还驮着一瓶巨大的啤酒，汽车却依然在路上飞驰。虽然这幅图有点夸张，但是它却反映了一个触目惊心的安全问题：醉酒驾车。写作时可以按照以下的脉络展开论述： 第一段：描述;第二段：分两个分论点进行论述：提高安全意识、提高社会责任感;第三段：建议措施、强调后果。思维拓展 实际上，本文的内容和行文思路，不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车，还适用于所有关于安全事故和社会责任的图片话题。 例如，火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交规等等一系列与安全或社会责任感相关的话题，都可以参考此文。 高分范文 What a scary and sensational scene it is! In the drawing， the driver， as drunken as a fiddler①， is driving fast on the road， with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car. What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country. The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility. For one thing， consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities. Life is one-way journey： you cannot experience it twice. So life is to be respected and awed②。 It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life， with a careless driving under the influence (DUI)③。 For another， to act as a responsible member of the society， each of us should bear social responsibility. We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us. It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important， leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and， may be， great living burden④。 | 
