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[考研大学英语写作] 考研作文批改范例1

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  Dear the children committee:(建议改为To whom it may concern,或者是Dear sir or Madam,)  I want to do (增加somethingfor the children at distance. I gave these children 50 yuan one yearI can give 50 yuan to one child each yearon plan, but this is only the thing(改为 although it is far from enough).  I understand me , I cannot do a lot of thing for distance children. I do not understand you give me what is a plan.  I often in the office. I can give my knowlegal for them, but I do not use it.  I want to do it, so you give me a advice. I believe me that I can do it beatiful. I have a stronger ,but how use it is the problem. I think the family may accept the thing. That think in the life.(内容不符合写作要求,语言表达错误过多!)  Your friend,

  

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