考研英语待批改作文: 5-7分 第一篇 Dear Kate, There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th. Campus English Corner October 22, 2012 考研英语作文批改点评如下: Dear Kate, There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th. (加Sincerely yours,) Campus English Corner October 22, 2012(删除) 5分 同学你好,考研小作文的字数要求是100词左右,你的作文虽然没有大问题,但是包含的内容太少,句型变换等也太少了。另外,要注意书信的格式。 |