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考研英语待批改作文： 0-4分 第二篇 Dear Nero， I am truly sorry that I broke an appointment. You were agreed that we will have dinner together tonight , but I receiced an urgent phone call from my office and I had to leave immediately . Due to the mistake , you must felt much inconvenience . If it were not for , we would have a wonderful memory . You told me you have time every Sunday , lets set an appointment on next Sunday evening. Once again， I am sorry for any inconvenience caused . Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely， Li Ming 考研英语作文批改点评如下： Dear Nero， I am truly sorry that I broke an(改为the) appointment. You were agreedthat we will have dinner together tonight, but I receiced(拼写错误，改为received) an urgent phone call from my office and I had to leave immediately . Due to the mistake , you must felt much inconvenience. If it were not for(改为If I hadnt left) , we would have a wonderful memory. You told me you have time every Sunday , lets set an appointment on next Sunday evening. Once again， I am sorry for any inconvenience caused . Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. | 
