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考研英语待批改作文： 0-4分 第一篇 Dear Jone, I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of Chinas industry organized by Shan Dong University. The reason is that I have been invested to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold by the world economic organization as academic critics during October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again， I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 考研英语作文批改点评如下： Dear Jone, I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of Chinas industry organized by Shan Dong University. The reason is that{I have been invested(用词不当)to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold(改为held) by the world economic organization as academic critics｝ during(改为from) October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely, | 
