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考研英语待批改作文： 5-7分 第二篇 Dear Miss Yuan, There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 考研英语作文批改点评如下： Dear Miss Yuan, There will be a celebrity(改为celebration) party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday. | 
