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[考研大学英语写作] 考研英语小作文批改例文第二期邀请信

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  8-10分

  第一篇

  Dear Dr.Wang,

  There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

  The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.

  I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  Dear Dr.Wang,

  There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

  The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.

  I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  9分

  同学你好,作文写的很好 ,没有语法错误,但是内容要是再丰富一些会更好。

  第二篇

  Dear Xiaoqiang,

  There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2013. We would be honored to have you there with us.

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