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考研英语待批改作文： 5-7分 第四篇 Dear Sir ， I am a customer of your store. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about a box of pen that I bought it from yours. The reason for my dissatisfaction is the quality of the pens is bad. In the first place，I found there is less two pens when I opened the box. In addition，a pen was broken and it didnt work. Under these circumstances， I find it very to your store. I appreciate it very much if you could give me there pens，preferably replace the whole box，and I would like to have this matter settled by one day. Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely， Li Ming 考研英语作文批改点评如下： Dear Sir ， I am a customer of your store. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about a box of pen that I bought it(删除)from yours. The reason for my dissatisfaction is the quality of the pens is bad(删除). In the first place，I found there is less two pens when I opened the box(不用there be 句型，可改为I found the box lacked of 2 pens when I opened it). In addition，a pen was broken and it didnt work. Under these circumstances， I find it very to your store. | 
